This brings me to the next piece of advice that I thought very well communicated from Murray: The Focusing Line. "... It is the product of all the observation and thinking that comes before the writing: listening, brainstorming, mapping, freewriting" (143). I now understand necessary details that have to be figured out before you start writing. So far I see that you need creativity and structure. After you have enjoyed your creative train of thought you then come to the focusing line. I like this idea very much. It is not your thesis statement, but it is a way of organizing all your creative ideas before you delve into tackling the thesis statement. Basically the focusing line focuses you. Now that is sweet and simple!
Monday, February 2, 2009
Putting the pieces together!
Reading through Murray this week was short, to the point, and enjoyable. I found chapter 9 very useful because, he gave 11 examples of different ways to outline. As I read through them I found two that I particularly liked. The first one was outline #4, making lists of Beginning, Middle, End, and Brain Storming List. I think I like this structure, because I am a list person. The second one I thought useful was outline #10. In English, my Professor is teaching this kind of technique. So far all I know is that you write on 3 by 5 cards all your ideas in an orderly fashion and then you can physically move your ideas around by moving the cards. I think that making a habit of incorporating either one of these structures or putting a bit of both of them together will really help me understand the structuring process of a paper. Right now I just put random ideas on a page, which are (really) good, but they don't have any where to go once I have written them. My ideas seem to get lost in a big picture that I haven't defined yet, and can't, because there is no definite focus.
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I like the outline chapter. And by giving mutiple ways of doing outline makes outline step more flexible. Everyone can have their own way of doing it. For our personal essay, I try to follow some of his outline structure and found it very helpful in orgainizing my ideas.
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